peltos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Life Lesson]

great animation

its an great animation. ofcourse its a bit on the short side but for an test and something you made in 24 hours you did an great work.the only thing that i noticed is the duration of the zombie thing, i thought it was a bit to long. i think it was almost 6 seconds. but thats just my personal taste. i just like short and fast appearances and disappearances ^^

its just an great animation :p

10/10
5/5

rhys510 responds:

Thanks man :D

[Night of the Redead]

good animation

its a cool animation that you have made and the idea is also good. there where stil some movements that didnt seem right to me but for a second non-sprite anmation is this really good.

but 1 thing still bothers me. from what game was this? ocarina of time or majora's mask? in the beginning i saw in the background the entry of the shadow temple but in the last scene you saw the man being posesed (or biten, i dont know) by the zombie and in majora's mask you also have that at the ikana canyon.

anyway.....
10/10
5/5

Eastbeast responds:

Great thanks for the review man, I really appreciate you taking the time. As for that last scene, It was just a product of my imagination; I tried to make it seem like it was on the outskirts of Kakariko Village, with the windmill in the background. I was going to add a scene of Pamela (Little girl) walking through the town, with some empowering music in the background, denoting that although she had been attacked and mother killed (That so far we know) life still had it's beauty.

[Penguinzz 1]

good flash

hey dude its me again :P

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About the flash
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its not bad made but there are a lot of things that need improvment. for example, the way the penguin move doesnt look natural and the sprite itself is just 1 frame. there are alot of tutorials on youtube or other sites that shows how to do such things so try to look at those

the music is to loud and VERY annoying. i had to turn of the music to watch the whole flash. there is a program thats called AudioCity. you can download it free and it lets you modify and any kind of music file.
also try to put some more music in the flash. in the first few minuts you dont here anything.

and the last piece of advise. TAKE MORE TIME TO MAKE IT. it becomes a lot better when you take the time for it.

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Rating
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Flash: 7/10
Music 6/10
Penguin 8/10 XD

Total: 7/10 (and a +1 friend bonus :P) 8/10

CubePanda responds:

Thanks Peltos! That was a great review, one of the best I've had xD
The music annoyed me too, I need to find a new bombing mission theme o___o

[Happy 18th GWS]

cool

nice extra dude only one thing is wrong.
YOU USED MY REAL NAME YOU IDIOT!!!!!!!

ChrisTobin responds:

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL Ill change later ;]

[helper]

AWSOME!!

this animation is awsome!!!
how long did it take to make it??

Icandraw responds:

i think 12 hours or less :D

[Yoshibound Episode 3 Test]

AWSOME!!!!

ITS AWSOME!!!!
only make a preloader and the song repeats its self.

MetaYoshi16 responds:

Thank you :)
I'll try and make a preloader :)

[Go jeeves go ep.3]

cool

this is realy cool man. i cant waot for the next episode :P

Giantsockmonster responds:

Thanks, it should be coming shortly :)

[OOP_TLC Episode 2]

great

its great for the first time.
next time try to make them move.

greatwh1teshark responds:

That's what I'm going to try to do.

[OOP_The ugly truth]

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the animation can use some work but the idea is good

Giantsockmonster responds:

ok...

[Fizz (Episode 1)]

great

great animation. work on the story it wasent that funny

Jimtopia responds:

Will do.